tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7177734302481866469.post8980508855728107013..comments2011-10-06T22:36:55.788-07:00Comments on According To Em: Shoes for WalkingEmilyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13583889202981612607noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7177734302481866469.post-75123649954190550482009-07-10T21:30:39.754-07:002009-07-10T21:30:39.754-07:00It's very true that you see so much more of th...It's very true that you see so much more of the world when you walk places. A thousand things pop out at you about the yards & houses you would never otherwise see zipping by in a car. I don't think many people get that on a profound level like you do. Enjoyed reading it. :)Just mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00619097161858253354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7177734302481866469.post-63568951246685225582009-07-06T12:00:52.407-07:002009-07-06T12:00:52.407-07:00I agree with Ian's comments that this post wou...I agree with Ian's comments that this post wouldn't look out of place in a self-help book, not that that's a bad thing!<br /><br />You do have potential and writing is one endless learning process, so keep doing what you're doing and you'll improve. The good thing about writing is that there's no right of wrong answer- it's each to their own, so never take to heart any criticism you may get. It's always constructive. That's what i tell myself when i get it!<br /><br />Cool blog, i'll be following. :)<br /><br />www.livewritedream.blogspot.comLouhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04152803362923785129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7177734302481866469.post-62420537529604710802009-07-05T19:32:02.291-07:002009-07-05T19:32:02.291-07:00I think it's a very interesting post. Definit...I think it's a very interesting post. Definitely a topic that I wouldn't have thought to write about. :) It's a very interesting view on suburbia and how it affects the life of shoes. Keep up the good work!mattmichrinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17427496222519161143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7177734302481866469.post-4218885410988723752009-07-05T15:08:11.586-07:002009-07-05T15:08:11.586-07:00Thanks for your comments. I'm glad that you g...Thanks for your comments. I'm glad that you gave my blog some thought.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13583889202981612607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7177734302481866469.post-66694148758138949212009-07-05T12:17:10.524-07:002009-07-05T12:17:10.524-07:00And by style I mean just fluency, flow, almost an ...And by style I mean just fluency, flow, almost an on-going cliffhanger.Ian Sharphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13097539289585099489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7177734302481866469.post-81278038805119526132009-07-05T12:16:18.433-07:002009-07-05T12:16:18.433-07:00cut out the "but as" before "you ne...cut out the "but as" before "you need" in that, whoops!Ian Sharphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13097539289585099489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7177734302481866469.post-133241396792799652009-07-05T12:15:30.309-07:002009-07-05T12:15:30.309-07:00I don't read much autobiographical work, but a...I don't read much autobiographical work, but as you need further style to keep the reader reading.<br /><br />Your voice is strong though and has much potential.<br /><br />Also, this kind of sounds like it belongs in a Self-Help book. Y'know? Write about what bothers you or a story or event that happened in your life, keep your aspirations to your professors.Ian Sharphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13097539289585099489noreply@blogger.com